Excellent evaluation of the use of conventions in your promotional music campaign. Very good use of presentation tool which is succinct and makes some really good points, backed by academic argument.
There are a couple of points about the presentation that needs to be developed:
1. Provide consistency in your presentation with style - for example consider where you have or have not used capitals.
2. It was Negus who argued that the MV was a promotional tool not Dyer (he discussed star image).
3. Provide a broader evaluation of where you have used, developed or challenged conventions.
There are a couple of points about the presentation that needs to be developed:
1. Provide consistency in your presentation with style - for example consider where you have or have not used capitals.
2. It was Negus who argued that the MV was a promotional tool not Dyer (he discussed star image).
3. Provide a broader evaluation of where you have used, developed or challenged conventions.
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